Change of Chorus!!

Original Chorus:

'Even though im on my own                    
I still have the seat to my throne
this world is a game, aint that a shame
and am I the one to blame'

Originally our chorus was based around the fact that our charcters are all alone and this idea inspired us to create this chorus, i still have the seat to my throne protrays that the characters are alone howver they still have their pride, world is a game shows the difficulties that all the charcaters have had to face, ain that a shame shows that the characters are prepared for life ahead. Overall the chorus is refering back to the moral of the song.

New Chorus

Even though I'm on my own,
I am not alone
I still have the seat to my throne
Own, own, own...

We have changed the wordings of the lyrics due to the fact that our main singer was not able to match her  voice melody with the rythm therefore we have kept the same concept, but just changed the words and length of the chorus.

finally with statisfaction of the chorus, as a group we discussed how to make the chorus appealing to our audience therefore we used an example from All of the lights by Kayne West, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAfFfqiYLp0&ob=av3e, we were very interested with the flashing colour of the words for the chorus, we were then sure that we wanted our chorus to be similar to that,

By all these effects of the writing and colour scheme made us influenced to include this style for our own chorus in our music video.